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The derelict’s loose fitting clothes accentuated his scrawny frame and were as stained and patchwork as his scraggly beard. The brisk wind swept him like refuse down the sidewalks of Paris, with his empty bag behind him as he shopped for Christmas.
He tripped under the lights fantastic hung like neon nooses on the trees lining the Champs Élysées. Though their dim illumination offered no warmth in the cold shadow of winter, he nonetheless left the area with his step a little lighter and his outfit a little brighter.
He could barely afford to pay attention to the automatons mindlessly making money in the shop windows, but when he deserted the displays, his beard appeared more lavish and he himself felt richer.
He chased the aroma of the Christmas cakes escaping from the bakeries and though his belly yelped, he could not reach the treats behind the glass. Yet when he finally passed he was sated with the Christmas spirit and his bag seemed full as well.
He had come to Paris to shop for Christmas and Christmas he had found. He took his color in the shine of lovers’ eyes as they walked through the elysian night. He collected strength in the sparkle of a child’s smile as she watched the Christmas windows. He stuffed his suit and bag with the generosity of those who gave to those with less.
When Nicholas flew out of the city, his suit was as rosy as his cheeks, his stout belly as full as his beard and his bag overflowed with the Christmas he got in Paris.
© Paul Prescott 2012
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It’s kind of like The Little Match Girl, ‘cept it’s a guy! And he does not die in the end.
What a lovely Christmas tale, poignant and demonstrative of what we hope is real behind all the consumerism.
I love the ballroom dancing window pic! I bet that one was nice to see in action. And the tree in the Galeries Lafayette – that ceiling is just so terrific.
Wonderful prose-poetry, as always.
Merry Christmas.
xx
Karin
Hi Babe!
Thanks for the props. Yes, the guy is a little like the little match guy except… he represents someone. Did you get that or was my prose a tad obscure?
Thanks for reading and see you in the streets,
Paris Paul
Okay, I got it! I was not 100% sure (so maybe slightly ambiguous, but you know me: if there is not a bright spot on it, I sometimes miss it!); however, your comment makes me see now who it is: the spirit of St. Nick.
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Como de costumbre, su pequenha
historia es hermosa y muy profunda…
Mil gracias por esto M. Paul y Feliz
Anho Nuevo!
Gracias por su amabilidad, María! Disfrute de esta temporada de fiestas y que el nuevo año te traiga todos los sueños que desea.
I forgot to mention how fantastic your photos are…
I love all of them! Thank you Paul.
very well written. i read this weeks ago and forgot to tell you how nice it was.
Thanks for the visit and the comment, krs. I really need to make more of an effort to post more of these, as this is where I really get my kicks.
See you in the streets, brother,
Paris Paul